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by Chris on May 10, 2012

Before I print this I wanted to run it through with everyone.

What do you think?

Can I improve anything on here? Maybe the “WANT MORE BUSINESS?” part?

Any copywriters here?



{ 11 comments… read them below or add one }

Rick May 10, 2012 at 4:12 pm

I would change the phone number color to something that stands out, like red.

And I would put your phone number on the inside cover of this brochure, not just the outside area.


Chris May 11, 2012 at 1:20 pm

I was going more for the corporate look but I’ll def try changing the phone number to red and see how it looks.

And also, I like how you said put the number in side too.

What would I do without you guys! =)


Dale Cox May 10, 2012 at 4:50 pm

Looks great…How about a headline with the word money or paying. “Want More Paying Customers?”
“Better Targeted Business Means More Money!” Just thinking.

To your success


Chris May 11, 2012 at 1:26 pm

Thanks Dale! I wish I was a better copywriter.


erik May 10, 2012 at 5:17 pm

I read “Want More Business?” and I’m like, “Why yes I do.” Then I read “Place Your Business At The Top Of The Search Engines” and I say, “Oh.” Excitement gone. With that said, I don’t have anything better off the top of my head.

Visually looks pretty good, I particularly like the testimonials.


Chris May 11, 2012 at 1:29 pm

hmmmm… interesting. Maybe I should only put “Want More Business?”

Thanks Erik!


Ian May 10, 2012 at 11:00 pm

Looking good Chris! Not sure if the ‘About Us’ section is needed, is a mission statement necessary on promo material? I’d have it shorter and sweeter myself, use that pace for something else.

But very nice otherwise!

Be Great,


Chris May 11, 2012 at 1:32 pm

What’s up Ian? Long time!

I’m actually going to use the brochure not as our main marketing piece. Our main marketing piece is going to be our salesman, direct mail, and telemarketer and this brochure is something we will mail to them with the main thing or just an add on.

Example: I’m going to have a killer sales letter + brochure (so they can see the testimonial and proof)


But I def get what you mean by the mission statement. I thought the same at first.

Gracias amigo!


Ian May 11, 2012 at 9:55 pm

Pretty cool Chris, and I always take the time out to read your mails, they are interesting unlike a lot of guys with lists out there!

Best of luck bro!


Chris May 11, 2012 at 10:46 pm

Ian, I def appreciate it and it means a lot to me.

I’m actually thinking of shutting this blog and going with more of a general blog since I like to talk about real estate much as I like talking about internet marketing. Something even my friends can relate to because they have no friggin idea what offline marketing is. =X

Anyways, always good to hear from you.

Let me know when you start blogging so I can return the favor!

Have a great weekend bro!


Toronto Web Development October 2, 2012 at 12:50 am

Hey Chris!
Amazing I just subscribed to your list honestly just to check out the freebie, and let me tell you that it was probably one of the best decisions iv done today! After watching your videos I couldn’t resist but to subscribe the list…
anyways I too am into offline internet marketing and I am just starting out, so all this great info you have shared over here are your blog is still some amazing content for somebody like me.

Thanks for being an inspirational figure and KEEP DOING WHAT CHU DOING BROTHER!

LOC Solutions a Toronto Web Development Company salutes you!


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